Storyboard:

Extra shots being added in:

Shot 8a: Camera moves into man, OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT of him looking at picture.

Shot 8b: Cuts to black and white flashback of a party. Man is walking down street, then stops at house looks through window, then looks through letter box. Close up of mans eyes looking through letter box.

Shot 8c: Folds picture over to look at Eiben.

We decided to add these scenes into our opening sequence of a thriller after we had watched many other peices of work. We thought that our idea needed more conventions of a thriller, therefore we have added a flashback and black and white scenes.

Dialogue


• Robyn and Eiben Walking down path

Robyn: you’re so lucky to have George.

Eiben: Ah well, I think I deserve him 

Robyn: do you think so? Ahaaaaa, why do I never get the good ones!

Eiben: I’m sure we could find you someone. I think I should have another party, as last weekend’s was so good! Possibly next weekend?

Robyn: Yeah sure, text me later, (looks at watch) Oh look at the time, I must go see you tomorrow!

(Robyn walks off down a path, Eiben carries on)


(actresses changed and dialogue stayed the same)